All In One Stride !!!

[RUTHLESS AGGRESSION]

In a corridor in the arena, Jonny Michaels is seen talking with Sasha, it looks as if they are deep in a humourus conversation, as every now and then they break into bursts of laughter. the camera zooms up onto thier faces, suddenly you can hear heavy breathing coming from somewhere, Sasha turns around to see Executioner towering over her.
Executioner: well..... What are you doing still stood there Sasha i want to get to Michaels!

Micahaels: Urrrm exactly what do you want with me?

Executioner: Well you are the backstage anouncer, so turn your Fu**ing mic on and start to interview me cause i got a few things i want to say.

Michaels: Ok give me a minute.... Ok were on.

Executioner: Great so... How are all of you doing out there?... Well i dont give a s*it so shut the F**k up ok ! So i got a few things i wana get off my chest, but dont worry ill make it easy for you A** holes here in the back and for you low life scum out there to follow. 1, My match against Knox at Forsaken, did you see it... Well michaels di you see it or not??

Michaels : Yea sure i did.

Executioner: Well then you will know what i mean when i say... I DESERVED TO WIN!! Knox was lucky to acctually walk out of that ring alive. I gave him a beating he will never forget, but still he got a lucky pin fall on me, The only reason i was caught out was because of.. Sasha, she was looking at me giving me those eyes, you know and so on, and next thing im on my back being pinned, so the solution is Sasha you look at me when im Fighting next time, ill climb out the ring and rip your head off.. HAHAHAHAHAHA. 2, My Tv title match on the 22nd, all i got to say about this is guys either you fake an injury or you call in sick, otherwise your have something much worse than an injury or illness, because youll be stepping in the ring with me... and i promise.. no i garauntee ill Brutally Murder you!! And last but not least.. 3, thats this many (holds up 3 fingers) Jamie Knox... You think your done and dusted with me? i dont think so. As we all know i was due to hunt down Rose after my match, but i think my threat got to her and she ran off crying, So.... i need to find someone else to use to get my point across, and that will be you, so dont get your heart set on walking out of the HIAC champion, because if i got anything to do with it, you wont be... You wont be walking at all.
So... all in one stride i will win the TV title, and cost Jamie knox not only the Heavy Weight Championship, but i will cost him his life too. HAHAHAHAHA!!!

Michaels: Ok thats it from me .....
Executioner: HEY, i can end my own interview, so here goes.
" Jamie Knoxx be scared, Jamie be afraid, when i win the TV title ill be going on Parade, sasha your so mmmmmm, and sasha your so cunning, Michaels you can just F*ck off, and Jamie I am coming!!

Executioner walks off down the corridor laughing histerically.

[Cartman]

OOC-

RA...

when writing 'promo's' you should not refer to the staff as what their stations really are... that makes it seem like your in the crowd or on tv yourself. we all know that michaels is the backstage interviewer... your character saying it makes it seem cheezy.

and I do like the feud your taking up with Noxx on your own.. good move.

but try to lengthen your roleplays and add more depth to them..(just trying to teach you to get better bro.. take no offence!)

and please try to tone down the cursing.. it is allowed (although *** out of course) but remember even in an efed.. the fake tv show is being telecast on TV. so the odd F-Off is ok but not too much.. thx..

Tim

[RUTHLESS AGGRESSION]

sure cheers for the tips, and ill cut the swearing down.