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Wild Thing
09-24-2004, 08:13 PM
<Jake "The Wild Thing" Brooks is on his way to the ring, it's his first appearence in the Wce. He looks sharp tonight in his black suite, the suite is ocompanied by a pink shirt and a pair of black shoes so shiny that he could use them as a mirror. It's just seconds now before he makes his highly antisipated first appearance; their is a nervous expression smacked across his face. The Music hits... it's his cue... it's his moment make or break.>

The music hits and Wild Thing confidently appears at the top of the titatron with a cheeky smile on his face. The crowd cheer madly even without really knowing who he is... theres just something about him that makes the crowd feel the need to cheer. He takes to the centre of the huge titatron and throws his powerful hand into the air and gazes into the admiring crowd as he's blitzed by an amazing array of spectalular pyros. He makes his journey to the ring slapping the hands of the adoring fans as he goes. He pauses a minute before entering the ring; it's been a life-long dream just to enter this ring, it's just a ring but it means so much it ouzzes so much passion. He enters and visits all of the four turnbuckles clapping the fans on each one. He gives a final smile at the crowd before his music fade and he says his fist words in the WcE.

Jake Brooks: Hey guys thanks for the brillinat welcome, it's nice to be here in LA. Well actually it's the first time i've ever been here and i'm lovin' ever minute of it.
It's such on honer for me to be stamging here in this very ring, i've wroked so hard just to be here.
*The Crowd Appluade*
Jake Brooks:Although as hard as i worked to get where i am today, i ain't just gonna sit around week after week having matches here and there; that's not what i'm here for i'm here to be somebody, to make a difference. I won't just be another brick in the wall!
*The Crowd Cheer*
Jake Brooks:There are certain people who this fed are who are due for an ass whoopin' and their time is up Jake "The Wild Thing" Brooks is here and theres gonna be a whole lot of trouble, i will get you there WILL BE NO ESCAPE!

As his lips shut from the final words that left his mouth, his music kicks in and the crowd go wild. Jake retires to the locker room
The Camera pans across the staduim and they're isn't a single smile missing from anyones face. What will this truly inspiring man have instore for the WcE?

Aries
09-24-2004, 09:21 PM
I just wanna add some advice, when you enter, the crowd dont cheer for guys they dont know, see, my character plays someone from town therefore will get a responce but I dont have the crowd going crazy over me, its not like anyone is famous in the fed therefore its not fully realistic.

Oh and also, work on your spelling, there are rare occasions, such as Crak Cokain aka Jake V1, when a lot of spelling errors are allowed to be passed, and thats the only occasion I know its passed, try spell checking it.

This isnt anything against you, its just helping you improve because as one of the top ones here, well I used to be until I went all crap and got writers block, but im just helping out :)

But overall, if your new to efedding its an alright Rp and I think that overtime you will improve :)

Wild Thing
09-25-2004, 11:27 AM
Thanks for the advice dude i really apreciate it. I just tried the spellchecker though and it wasn't working do you know why?

Thanks Wild Thing (Luke).

Cartman
09-25-2004, 04:13 PM
OOC-

i'm not sure why the spell checker is working.. ..

but it you have Microsoft Word (it comes with most PC's today that has XP installed) copy and paste it in there and do all your rp's from there.. thats what i have always done..

even at 36 i'm not the best of spellers and i don't claim to be.. just ask anyone i chat with..lol

but if you don't have Word..

go to downloads.com and see if they have any free or shareware text programs with a spell checker ability..

good luck bro and welcome to WcE!

Tim

Wild Thing
09-26-2004, 03:14 PM
Thanks Dude for the advice, it's a good idea. Looking forward to roleplaying again!

Glovebox
09-26-2004, 10:41 PM
Just, for you e-fedders, the spell checker is now working again.

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